First of all, nice that you shared this with us poor non scholars
So, some feedback.
Right now it sound pretty similiar to Life is Feudal, except that there are going to be two "static" Kingdoms. I cant even really read out that your focus (i hope atleast so) lies in warfare and diplomatic since Economy and Terraforming stuff is listed first. For me it sounds rather like economy would have a bigger part of the gameplay than battles etc. themselves.
I know its just a very raw concept with that few lines but still because of that it sounds like LiF, so just got some questions to differentiate it out.
1. Resource gathering
So will you need to go yourself to a location (mine, forrest etc.) to gather them or can you (like you had in concept for stronghold) hire npc´s to mine? Will it take minutes to chop a tree or will you just click
for once and its a automatic process?
2. Size/Map
Will there a big walkable map or like strategus just that you can visit the places?
And i hope you dont really have a fixed size for the map in mind so you can adjust it to the playerbase size. Playing with 100 players on a map concipated for 500 wouldnt be much fun.
3. Respawning/Tickets
Will there be permadeath? Since there are assasinations it sounds like that =) Maybe make assasinations disabling a character for a certain ammount of time? And how will it be handled in battles?
4. Battles
Will there be something like in current strat a schedule for battles? Otherwise i can imagine 5 no-lifers taking a castle at 6 am or something like that.
Can you hire armies (similiar to the commander mode) of bots which you could command to fight for you or is it just playerbattles.
Basically how if the entire army movement, creating, attacking stuff etc. gonna work? Atleast a little insight in a concept would be nice eventho its pretty early for that =)
5. Diplomacy
Is diplomacy between different factions possible? Like can there be 2 factions in one kingdom at war with each other? Can factions out of the two kingdoms have a secret truce? So basically how is
diplomacy between factions handled?
Edit: was there some place for feedback for the kickstarter campaign?