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Re: New logo contest
« Reply #210 on: September 24, 2012, 10:56:45 pm »
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It is, but you used it first, so I think it's pretty cheap by Khorin.

I mean, by principal you do not use something someone already used as it is... well -- lame?
Bjord, your stand on using models without permission is "if they don't give you permission just use it anyway, fuck them and their hard work." please stop sucking Elindors dick for a second and think about things, maybe you'll realize this ain't that different.
1H stab is the fastest, strongest and longest 1H animation. There's no reason NOT to use it in all instances. I don't know if it's OP, but it's boring. 1H used to be fun because you had a fast (left), long (right) and the most devastating attack (stab) and had to choose the best attack for each occasion.

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Re: New logo contest
« Reply #211 on: September 24, 2012, 11:08:20 pm »
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It is, but you used it first, so I think it's pretty cheap by Khorin.

I mean, by principal you do not use something someone already used as it is... well -- lame?
Did not know it was the same font as Elindor. Just browsed through my fonts in Gimp and tried a bunch of different ones, and most are way too ornamental for my taste or not medieval-ish enough, this striked a nice middleground.

It's not exactly an uncommon font. It was either this font, or some horribly overstylized medieval fonts, or the warcraft font or the lotr font which I had to choose from. I believe this one is the God of War font. This reminded me of Bjord's earlier comment about Elindor's font:
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Oh, and here it is without the drop shadow(still need to clean the sword up a bit):
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No disrespect intended to Elindor. I'm sorry for using the font, I truly did not realize. I can change it if you wish me to.
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Re: New logo contest
« Reply #212 on: September 24, 2012, 11:41:31 pm »
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Well, I assumed he did(even wrote that I assumed), so whatever.

Anyway, one thing that bothered me are these speckles of "dirt" on your logo. I would highlight them, but I think you know what I mean. It would look better if you cleaned that up.
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Re: New logo contest
« Reply #213 on: September 24, 2012, 11:57:34 pm »
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Bjord tell me what I should do to my hand drawn logo. Is it something I should keep polishing/taking another angle on or is it just a waste of time? I might have gone too much outside the normal comfort zone of gaming logos with it...
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Re: New logo contest
« Reply #214 on: September 25, 2012, 12:15:10 am »
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Well, I assumed he did(even wrote that I assumed), so whatever.

Anyway, one thing that bothered me are these speckles of "dirt" on your logo. I would highlight them, but I think you know what I mean. It would look better if you cleaned that up.
Heh. That happened originally by mistake, but it kind of grew on me, because it reminded me of CRPG(computer role-playing games) game logo's of old.
They had the grainy dirty quality to them mainly due to being lower resolution and always looked a little off in colours. I thought it'd be a funny double-reference that no one will understand   :lol:

Here's kinda what I mean:
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My logo has this obscure stoney metallicky thing going on with it.

Bjord tell me what I should do to my hand drawn logo. Is it something I should keep polishing/taking another angle on or is it just a waste of time? I might have gone too much outside the normal comfort zone of gaming logos with it...

You need to try and develop it further to make it a little clearer what it stands for. (Making it look like a medieval tapestry thing would be awesome!)
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Re: New logo contest
« Reply #215 on: September 25, 2012, 12:24:24 am »
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This is some nice work!

Some thoughts:

- On a darker background some decent rim lighting may come in handy.
- I don't know if it'll need the texture so badly, maybe a less heavy textured version for the new trailer, but for the website it won't need a texture I'd say.
- I like the flag. but I personally would change it in a way that you can read the letters even without the flag being transparent. I like the effects though, I'm not against it. Like I said, the logo version for a trailer should have some more action, imho.
- About the typography, will you do anything about the lower part of the R letter? I think it should be adjusted so that it goes along with the P more smoothly. Maybe like this:

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(but if i were you I would actually try find another solution to that ... heh)

Anyway, best luck with this entry!






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Re: New logo contest
« Reply #216 on: September 25, 2012, 01:19:17 pm »
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Khorin, you should try and cut off a bit of that dirty white background from the copy pasted sword.
1H stab is the fastest, strongest and longest 1H animation. There's no reason NOT to use it in all instances. I don't know if it's OP, but it's boring. 1H used to be fun because you had a fast (left), long (right) and the most devastating attack (stab) and had to choose the best attack for each occasion.

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Re: New logo contest
« Reply #217 on: September 25, 2012, 03:54:48 pm »
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This is my take on new logo it is still a work in progress but I thought it would be nice to have some feedback. What you guys think? flipped "G" too much?

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Re: New logo contest
« Reply #218 on: September 25, 2012, 03:58:37 pm »
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Fixed :mrgreen:

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Re: New logo contest
« Reply #219 on: September 25, 2012, 04:03:49 pm »
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This is my take on new logo it is still a work in progress but I thought it would be nice to have some feedback. What you guys think? flipped "G" too much?

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This is actually really nice compositionally...the question, as you mentioned, is about the flipped G.  Just depends how the devs feel about that.
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Re: New logo contest
« Reply #220 on: September 25, 2012, 04:05:07 pm »
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This is some nice work!

Some thoughts:

- On a darker background some decent rim lighting may come in handy.
- I don't know if it'll need the texture so badly, maybe a less heavy textured version for the new trailer, but for the website it won't need a texture I'd say.
- I like the flag. but I personally would change it in a way that you can read the letters even without the flag being transparent. I like the effects though, I'm not against it. Like I said, the logo version for a trailer should have some more action, imho.
- About the typography, will you do anything about the lower part of the R letter? I think it should be adjusted so that it goes along with the P more smoothly. Maybe like this:

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(but if i were you I would actually try find another solution to that ... heh)

Anyway, best luck with this entry!


Thanks Kajia!

Yeah I had in my original post (page 2?) a clean version of the logo, and I will upload a "inverted" version for if it went over a dark color.
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Re: New logo contest
« Reply #221 on: September 25, 2012, 04:10:24 pm »
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I really like Juhanius's.

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Re: New logo contest
« Reply #222 on: September 25, 2012, 04:17:27 pm »
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First - a fix for the banner so it goes BEHIND the "P" :)

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Then here it is non-textured over dark background:

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And here it is non-textured no banner over dark background :

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Re: New logo contest
« Reply #223 on: September 25, 2012, 04:34:17 pm »
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btw:  anyone who wants to can gladly modify my idea.  I like it a lot but dont have the experience nor the time to do it better atm.
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Re: New logo contest
« Reply #224 on: September 25, 2012, 05:03:24 pm »
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