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Rank the essay!

1 - bad
42 (33.1%)
2
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3
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4
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5 - good
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Offline Snickers

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My character is gone.
« on: February 15, 2011, 01:35:36 am »
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chadz you gotta help me out.
My character Snickers_BRD is gone i can't seem to login into C-rpg.net and when i login to the game i have a peasant  with beginning stuff.
Can you please retrieve my account.
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Re: My character is gone.
« Reply #1 on: February 15, 2011, 01:38:36 am »
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You got caught my friend, with them dirty hands of yours in da candy box...
He is despised and rejected of men; a man of sorrows, and acquainted with grief. He was oppressed, and he was afflicted, yet he opened his mouth.

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Re: My character is gone.
« Reply #2 on: February 15, 2011, 01:57:55 am »
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Re: My character is gone.
« Reply #3 on: February 15, 2011, 02:04:15 am »
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Playing on 2 servers at the same time doesn't serve a purpose is because it will hurt your teammates because you will not be playing in one of the servers at one time or another so your team will have a lower chance of being able to win the round. It is also unfair because you will be getting double the experience and money, where the rest of the C-rpg players, have to use their time, sweat and blood in leveling and earning money for their character. Teamwork is important to do many things and I was not a team player. As said by Jin Kwon "One piece of log creates a small fire, adequate to warm you up, add just a few more pieces to blast an immense bonfire, large enough to warm up your entire circle of friends; needless to say that individuality counts but team work dynamites."in that sense I was an useless piece of drift wood. In conclusion it is not smart or good to play on two servers at once.

(Quote by Jin Kwon)

After this Incident about me being caught doing such a blasphemous action, I have learn to be a law-abiding citizen on the C-rpg server and I am willing to be a role model for the other people who play C-rpg. C-rpg isn't just a game it is a way of life and in life people have accidents and mistakes, like what happened to me, I was peer pressured into dual servering by many bad influences and I don't want anybody to make the same mistake I had made recently.

As John Wooden said "If you're not making mistakes, then you're not doing anything. I'm positive that a doer makes mistakes." It is normal for people to make mistakes in life, people learn from those mistakes and become a greater good on society.

(Quote by John Wooden)

In conclusion, I am sorry chadz, I am sorry C-rpg, I am sorry world, and I am sorry my beloved teammates. All in all nobody should be playing on two servers at once.
« Last Edit: February 16, 2011, 05:48:50 am by Snickers »
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Re: My character is gone.
« Reply #4 on: February 15, 2011, 02:45:13 am »
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Took some time and some help from us helpful guys in IRC, but it ended up ok.

I'd say a solid 3/5.

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Re: My character is gone.
« Reply #5 on: February 15, 2011, 02:47:09 am »
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I voted 3/5 as well.

Your ending is almost good (should have been 3 I am sry not 4). You did work on those quotes.

Constructive critisism:

Work on your grammar. Mine ain't good, but yours could use some work; at least it is not totally incomprehensible.
Turn down the font size, and make it more obvious when you are writing and when you are quoting aka sort you paragraphs.

Edit: My judgement is based upon your claimed age of about 14.

« Last Edit: February 15, 2011, 03:14:55 am by Aemaelius »
He is despised and rejected of men; a man of sorrows, and acquainted with grief. He was oppressed, and he was afflicted, yet he opened his mouth.

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Re: My character is gone.
« Reply #6 on: February 15, 2011, 02:47:51 am »
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3->2 for referencing a TV series character. I expect at least a reference from Joyce's Ulysses.

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Re: My character is gone.
« Reply #7 on: February 15, 2011, 02:49:00 am »
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2 Two block quotes are quite unnecessary.  Wasn't structured all that well.
Hu?

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Re: My character is gone.
« Reply #8 on: February 15, 2011, 03:22:37 am »
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It seems sincere, but I still vote 1/5  :mrgreen:  Doubling your xp by going on two servers is fail.

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Re: My character is gone.
« Reply #9 on: February 15, 2011, 03:43:23 am »
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that essay changed my life.

thank you.
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Re: My character is gone.
« Reply #10 on: February 15, 2011, 03:46:53 am »
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No problem
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Re: My character is gone.
« Reply #11 on: February 15, 2011, 04:32:41 am »
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Jesus I get on cRPG to get away from essays.  :shock:
lol.................
jk Good job 3.6/5

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Re: My character is gone.
« Reply #12 on: February 15, 2011, 05:56:29 am »
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I know! I know! ...and he was half naked with a wooden sword (on both servers of course) and was alt+tab AFK- running blindly into the enemy spawn T_T And now he's gonna be a role model!! XD

3/5 - cuz i think it was honest :rolleyes:

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Re: My character is gone.
« Reply #13 on: February 15, 2011, 08:50:00 am »
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I lost my character and I was topping the charts on both computers xD
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Re: My character is gone.
« Reply #14 on: February 15, 2011, 09:29:44 am »
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Rock solid 4
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