Your banner are nice for this pack but i suggest to rethink your alternative banner.
I dont think that one will make it in the alternative pack. To many details etc. Try to get it more simple and more like a banner actually could have been.
Just some ideas for your side.
Thanks for your advice. I forgot, that the banner has to be simple. I concentrated on the serious-style.
Hm, maybe I should swap the banners? Do you think, the other one is also too complex for alternative pack?