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Re: The Assault on Rhadogir Castle
« Reply #15 on: August 12, 2011, 11:18:24 pm »
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Amazing, Bravo.
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Re: The Assault on Rhadogir Castle
« Reply #16 on: August 12, 2011, 11:39:54 pm »
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Re: The Assault on Rhadogir Castle
« Reply #17 on: August 13, 2011, 12:01:19 am »
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Always appreciate good work, doesn't matter who writes it. BTW, I think you mean spear instead of "speer"
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Re: The Assault on Rhadogir Castle
« Reply #18 on: August 13, 2011, 12:25:21 am »
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Quote from: 7000bc on August 13, 2011, 12:01:19 am
Always appreciate good work, doesn't matter who writes it. BTW, I think you mean spear instead of "speer"

Actually, I think that's a tribute to native's truly unique spelling style.
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Re: The Assault on Rhadogir Castle
« Reply #19 on: August 13, 2011, 12:48:25 am »
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I shot someone in the throat. I approve. 8-)
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Re: The Assault on Rhadogir Castle
« Reply #20 on: August 13, 2011, 12:54:37 am »
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Quote from: 7000bc on August 13, 2011, 12:01:19 am
Always appreciate good work, doesn't matter who writes it. BTW, I think you mean spear instead of "speer"

Haha sorry, i misspell sometimes when I get to typing fast.

Fixed!

also, thank you. =)
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Re: The Assault on Rhadogir Castle (Update - Part 2)
« Reply #21 on: August 13, 2011, 03:27:45 am »
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I like "speer" more.
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Re: The Assault on Rhadogir Castle (Update - Part 2)
« Reply #22 on: August 13, 2011, 03:42:32 am »
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Nice work! Read it all, and would gladly read the next part.
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Re: The Assault on Rhadogir Castle (Update - Part 2)
« Reply #23 on: August 13, 2011, 04:11:01 am »
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You need to add more fantasy to this story - I mean I see Matey in this story as a berskerker, dwarven pirate.   Work more creative elements into the story like that.  I see lawngnomeBRD as as a sprightly gnome with a weakness for good whiskey and short women.
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Re: The Assault on Rhadogir Castle (Update - Part 2)
« Reply #24 on: August 13, 2011, 05:07:58 am »
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I see some goretooth/guardan dialogue in this has some typos and misspelled words. Was this by design? If so, you're a god damn genius.


Either way, very well written!
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Re: The Assault on Rhadogir Castle (Update - Part 2)
« Reply #25 on: August 13, 2011, 11:11:31 am »
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Nice story... fun to read, thanks.
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Re: The Assault on Rhadogir Castle (Update - Part 2)
« Reply #26 on: August 14, 2011, 06:30:02 am »
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So unfair... I wasn't even there.
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Re: The Assault on Rhadogir Castle (Update - Part 2)
« Reply #27 on: August 14, 2011, 03:08:54 pm »
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So unfair... I wasn't even there.

Shut the FUCK UP, Freekill!  :mrgreen:
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Re: The Assault on Rhadogir Castle (Update - Part 2)
« Reply #28 on: August 15, 2011, 04:06:37 am »
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Re: The Assault on Rhadogir Castle (Update - Part 2)
« Reply #29 on: August 15, 2011, 04:33:23 am »
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Have you written the accounts of last night's battles yet?  I want to hear you glorify the peasant slaughter at the castle and the desertion of an entire village.
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