Only convert 2 points on your first build not 8. Put 6 into weaponmaster (more wpf is always useful especially when youa re dual-classing like this), 6 into athletics, 6 into powerstrike, 6 into powerthrow (only 3 your javelins wont do much damage, 6 will increase shoot speed, damage and accuracy), and the last 5 into ironflesh as it is really useful when you wear heavy armor as it can add up to another 1-2 hits.
Equipment wise: Don't be another generic guy, everyone and their brother uses the 3 most expensive swords even though they are not the best. Try out the heavy great sword (faster) or the nodachi (longer, more cut damage) or the longsword (all around best 2her). There are a dozen other cool 2hers that msot people ignore. Also, with your armor and that sword you will have it allbroken and not afford repairs inside of a week.