falling like faint leaves
harder then reason itself
forgotten and lost
Traditional haiku yes, but why bother? We are speaking English no? It is very hard to mimic traditional haiku's, which doesn't even Have to be 5-7-5, not even using 17 syllables and so on. So until some zen master emerges from the depths of these forums to teach us foreign dogs, you will simply have to endure our westernized versions..