After reading through the thread, I'd have to rate it a 9/11 would not read again, but still a better story than twilight.
Oh and Firebus, words are words. Lies are words, and the truth is sometimes words. Words mean nothing. Get insurance next time. I think you're lucky Bjord bended to the criticism of this community, after previously making the decision not to honor the verbal agreement. I'm in no way agreeing with Bjord's original decision however, he had no real obligation to honor the agreement, in my opinion, other than from a moral standpoint.
In before the erecting of the cRPG People's Court.