Excellent! Your accent is a bit too "soft" though: r is hard much like in scottish "r" but shorter. Vowels also should be harder, otherwise you make it more like "movie russian"
. "e" should sound like in word "generation" without any hint of soft "ie", if you know what I mean. But as to the rhythm and intonation, you are getting better and better. come over to TS if you want to train