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english guys: help me phrase something here please:
« on: March 13, 2013, 11:21:53 pm »
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ya so i know what i wanna say but cant in correct english,  just sounds gay.  would be helpfull if you could rephrase especially the first part,  should sound a bit professional.  I wanna send this shit away today and its 11 pm here and I dunno anyone else i could ask -.-  (btw this aint concerning me ; )

To whom it may concern,
starting April 2013, I will take a break from modeling due to private issues,  and return in January 2014.
Great thanks for the numerous shootings, on stays, Castings, Catwalks and direct bookings!  I am looking forward to a successful year 2014!

so the first sentence is supposed to state that i wanna do a "creative break/pause"  but im not sure that is actually a word in english,  dont really wanna say shit about private issues...
the second sentence is ok imo,  but pls help me rephrase the first one.

also i am drunk which doesnt help my english skills,  fuck.
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Re: english guys: help me phrase something here please:
« Reply #1 on: March 14, 2013, 12:28:26 am »
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lol Torben is a top model, post a picture please!
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Re: english guys: help me phrase something here please:
« Reply #2 on: March 14, 2013, 12:34:17 am »
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How about

"To whom it may concern:   
     Starting in April of this year, I will be taking a break from modeling because of some personal events, however I will return to modeling in January of 2014. "

Probably could be better, but I think it is decent

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« Last Edit: March 14, 2013, 12:41:40 am by Nazgull »
Yes, been posted before. Rather than practicing swinging a weapon, it would be better to go 1 hander and learn a martial art that specializes in takedowns, because that's all that really matters in that sport.

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Re: english guys: help me phrase something here please:
« Reply #3 on: March 14, 2013, 12:42:10 am »
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Don't forget the "sincerely" and signing part. That's like, half the emotional content of a message.

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Re: english guys: help me phrase something here please:
« Reply #4 on: March 14, 2013, 12:43:33 am »
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What is this "Emotional content" of which you speak?
Yes, been posted before. Rather than practicing swinging a weapon, it would be better to go 1 hander and learn a martial art that specializes in takedowns, because that's all that really matters in that sport.

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Re: english guys: help me phrase something here please:
« Reply #5 on: March 14, 2013, 12:44:08 am »
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What is this "Emotional content" of which you speak?

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Re: english guys: help me phrase something here please:
« Reply #6 on: March 14, 2013, 08:41:30 am »
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Pics or GTFO.

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Re: english guys: help me phrase something here please:
« Reply #7 on: March 14, 2013, 12:15:15 pm »
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no no no,  this was for a friend.  i  am a fat old computernerd.  but seriously sending business emails when drunk is not the best idea -.-
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