Off Topic => General Off Topic => Topic started by: lionair112 on January 27, 2018, 09:30:40 pm
Title: Vayze Tunes
Post by: lionair112 on January 27, 2018, 09:30:40 pm
Heya guys, its vayze here rushing to work to promote two tracks I just released. Warning: These are raps, I know people stray away from most of it nowadays cus of the dweebs ruining it for the rest of us who live this hip hop thing. But for the rest who actually take a listen, I hope you appreciate it at least half as much as I do. The second one with my homie is straight off the dome cus we love and live hiphop. Lastly, if you could leave feedback that would be love cus im always trying to improve and please, thanks for reading this essay. I will post other places when i have the time. Got the youtube links in for you youtubers enjoy :D https://youtu.be/0xY5yVePv6Q (https://youtu.be/0xY5yVePv6Q) https://youtu.be/EEHwAvrNWbk (https://youtu.be/EEHwAvrNWbk) https://soundcloud.com/uche-smif/okonkwo-freestyle-prod-uche-smifurbandynamics (https://soundcloud.com/uche-smif/okonkwo-freestyle-prod-uche-smifurbandynamics) https://soundcloud.com/uche-smif/melo-drip-freeze-ft-uche-smif (https://soundcloud.com/uche-smif/melo-drip-freeze-ft-uche-smif)
Title: Re: Vayze Tunes
Post by: Gravoth_iii on January 31, 2018, 05:22:57 am
Stoner music, get a job you bum. Or at least learn to play an instrument and join a jazz band or something respectable.
Title: Re: Vayze Tunes
Post by: Drunken_sailor on January 31, 2018, 06:27:15 am
mumble rap, ehh tired. Your lyrics are good but I dont feel like you have your own style, alot of borrowed trends, find some way to make your music yours, also whats the martial art in your picture?
Title: Re: Vayze Tunes
Post by: Bronto on January 31, 2018, 05:29:02 pm
Man, you're getting better for sure. Your rhymes are flowin more smoothly. Just keep writing and recording and eventually you'll have Ah-Ha moment and come into your own groove. You're getting there but I know you can do better if you just keep at it and don't give up. I wouldn't worry so much about articulating words, I'm sure you listen to a lot of rap and half those motherfuckers mumble their shit, and the other half sound like whack ass professors. Figure out which one you want to be, immerse yourself in it. I feel like you're treading the line between which you want to be. Of course you don't want to clip your words but sometimes that's ok if it fits the style of the song you're recording. Also, make music dynamic, it has to have loud parts and quiet parts, not the same level the entire way through. One last thing, music has parts, so you got to organize it and it's all about the chorus hook. So for example try organizing your songs like intro, verse, chorus, verse, chorus, bridge, chorus, end. I might work on a beat for you if I ever get the free time and send it over.
Edit: For fuck's sake, some guy got famous for repeating Gucci Gang 7 times as his hook and some poor rap about weed and banging chicks.
Title: Re: Vayze Tunes
Post by: Grytviken on January 31, 2018, 07:24:34 pm