Didn't care to read the wall of text, but it seems like a story.
Shouldn't there be a subforum for this or just spam????
lol yeah my english isnt that good :P
It is stupid itself, so I would give it 1/10, but if we add your grammar and (lack of) writing skills...thats not fair at all. his english isnt that bad, same with grammar and the writing skills.(click to show/hide)
In most countrys its illegal to publish stuff like this.
Once again the trolls surface...sigh
I wish people would at least try to respect others.
Respect? This is the internet dude...
Exactly. Those who don't have the guts for these things shouldn't even be here.
I forgot this is a hardcore gaming forum where no one has to follow the rules, OMG we are such rebels.
Thing is I only write stuff what I would say in public to real people, some of you write stuff to only shock or to try and prove your hard or funny cos you may have inadequacies in real life, (Not you Gnjus your a dude)
Its not big and its not clever.
Respect? This is the internet dude...
An epic tale.
A strong start and an even stronger ending.
9/10
I forgot this is a hardcore gaming forum where no one has to follow the rules, OMG we are such rebels.
Thing is I only write stuff what I would say in public to real people, some of you write stuff to only shock or to try and prove your hard or funny cos you may have inadequacies in real life, (Not you Gnjus your a dude)
Its not big and its not clever.
The ending was pretty sick. If someone likes things like this they should read the Manga "Berserk". Its the story about an epic 2hander guy who meets a swashbuckler and 2hander chick. Then some sick shit happens, and he respecs to 2hander+xbow. (one can also watch the anime, but then a lot of the sickest shit is removed)Berserk is pretty twisted. Even the anime doesn't end nicely though lol.
Oh btw, when I read: "But it all changed a winters morning in the town of Yalen when she was 13 year old."
I thought to myself: "13 isnt so young... "
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Ah, just like good ol' times!