Off Topic => General Off Topic => Topic started by: Torben on March 13, 2013, 11:21:53 pm
Title: english guys: help me phrase something here please:
Post by: Torben on March 13, 2013, 11:21:53 pm
ya so i know what i wanna say but cant in correct english, just sounds gay. would be helpfull if you could rephrase especially the first part, should sound a bit professional. I wanna send this shit away today and its 11 pm here and I dunno anyone else i could ask -.- (btw this aint concerning me ; )
To whom it may concern, starting April 2013, I will take a break from modeling due to private issues, and return in January 2014. Great thanks for the numerous shootings, on stays, Castings, Catwalks and direct bookings! I am looking forward to a successful year 2014!
so the first sentence is supposed to state that i wanna do a "creative break/pause" but im not sure that is actually a word in english, dont really wanna say shit about private issues... the second sentence is ok imo, but pls help me rephrase the first one.
also i am drunk which doesnt help my english skills, fuck.
Title: Re: english guys: help me phrase something here please:
Post by: Zlisch_The_Butcher on March 14, 2013, 12:28:26 am
lol Torben is a top model, post a picture please!
Title: Re: english guys: help me phrase something here please:
Post by: Carthan on March 14, 2013, 12:34:17 am
How about
"To whom it may concern: Starting in April of this year, I will be taking a break from modeling because of some personal events, however I will return to modeling in January of 2014. "
Probably could be better, but I think it is decent