That's a good build.
You can also try 18/18:
Level 30 (4 420 577 xp)
Strength: 18
Agility: 18
Hit points: 63
Skills to attributes: 2
Ironflesh: 5
Power Strike: 6
Shield: 6
Athletics: 6
Riding: 0
Horse Archery: 0
Power Draw: 0
Power Throw: 0
Weapon Master: 6
One Handed: 156
Two Handed: 1
Polearm: 1
Archery: 1
Crossbow: 1
Throwing: 1
You move faster and your shield lasts longer. You also won't get outreached that fast and can use even shorter weapons like the Steel Pick with it. Perhaps a little bit better choice for a beginner.