Hmm that's quite an extreme build. 
I'd go for a balanced 18/18 or 15/21 myself. Guess it kinda depends on what weapon you plan on using. With low strength, you'll get more glances and you'll need more hits to kill people. 
Here's a more 'all round' 1h + shielder build that will work well with swords:
    * Strength: 18
    * Agility: 18
    * Hit points: 63
    * Converted: 2
    * Ironflesh: 5
    * Power Strike: 6
    * Shield: 6
    * Athletics: 6
    * Weapon Master: 6
    * One Handed: 156