Hmm that's quite an extreme build.
I'd go for a balanced 18/18 or 15/21 myself. Guess it kinda depends on what weapon you plan on using. With low strength, you'll get more glances and you'll need more hits to kill people.
Here's a more 'all round' 1h + shielder build that will work well with swords:
* Strength: 18
* Agility: 18
* Hit points: 63
* Converted: 2
* Ironflesh: 5
* Power Strike: 6
* Shield: 6
* Athletics: 6
* Weapon Master: 6
* One Handed: 156