I like them a lot. Though, and just throwing this out there early on so it can be discredited by the third page, the second one looks a little minstrel-y to me.
"Topa tha mornin ta ya Cambell!"
"aye aye, tis a good mornin this"
"av ya had a chanss to pley thu paips ye?"
"nah nah, buh aye ope ta afore it gits wet afer nooon"
"aye aye, it olweys gits wet in thu afernooon"
